My mark Shaikh's mark Analysis 12/20 16/20 Examples 10/20 14/20 Terminology 4/10 6/10
Overall mark 26/50 36/50
Grade D=52% B=72%
What i have done well in my response: Covered all technical areas used correct terminology
What i need to focus on in the future -Referred to the question more -more in depth answers and explanations -more examples -representations -Sustain analysis throughout-keep all 4 areas in sections -Avoid informal phrases "wear the trousers" -be specific in
-The police are always involved someway or another, main focus seems to be on them -Story line (main) will evolve around some sort of crime -Backed up by other story line such as love affairs and relationships -main setting would be in the police station and including cells, interviews and offices, separating each narrative making it clear to the audience - Colours throughout seem dull and monotone, represent dark-evil-sin-bad-wrong thing -Police uniform-black clothing, hats and vests with walkie talkies -equal role of both men and women, male with authority, female with authority, but all in all there seems to be more male roles -crime usually happen at night-investigate in the day -setting includes the scene of the crime, which means that the narrative and setting will change every time -forensics often included for verisimilitude, to emphasize the importance of the crime committed and its extent - beginning of the bill- white on black writing, this is the same as the uniform and is monotone for simplicity and for the divide between high authority and everyone else -siren in the background of the theme music, with a blue flashing light in synchronize with the music, representing the sirens on police cars -binary opposites, hight authority police, forensics, dressed and act differently to ,make it obvious -the criminals may change also, this is similar with the setting as it can be changed each episode -main characters will remain throughout and will stay the same,
